I've made a brief presentation to Andrea when we met and it definitely helped to explain my ideas more clearly and easier for him to add a feedback as he could just fix some quotes/images and rewrite straight on to it. Some of my images were used not appropriately in some cases and some case studies needed to polished up.
These are some of really important feedbacks that I had from Andreas;
- Don’t explore differences in terms of what’s “best”. Be critical. No classification.
- In conclusion you can be personal and compare the results of your research into art and nudity with your feelings and thoughts (and your social position) as a female visual communicator.
- Don't try to write perfect. Just start writing all the thoughts and research first and smooth it later.
- The successful dissertation will be a collection of your thoughts with communication. Not collection of references.
- Your final piece doesn't have to a nude of yourself or naked body, think more how to deliver your view of nudity visibly and by not necessarily using human body.
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